Last week i wrote a song, and all the time i was writing it I thought it was good song but when it was finished and i had read it through, I found that there was something missing, that it didnt ring true. So, I tore it up, Then again i thought of composing different songs about the conditions and my situations im holding right now. Here it goes.......
1.Far away from my hometown,
came to a place (Niscort) to learn new things.
But things doesnt goes well as i expected,
Everybody knows what's goin on.
But doesnt change the way i feel about myself.
Cho:-Do you know how much I blame myself,
Can you realised that,
Don't really need your advice at all.
Myself already knows i'm not okay.
2. I played and composed songs for a project hell,
But mom doesn't mean that I'm antichrist.
I take a drugs to get a funny feeling,
Stop calling me retard, its my own way.
Cho:-
3. I'm single right now, but doesnt need other chicks
to bring me down,
No fallin in love till ma dreams come true.
I dont have time for psychological romance,
Bitch, I am sick when you are around.
Cho:-
#GOD, WHY ME?
I HATE MYSELF, PLZ LEAVE ME ALONE.
-Oh, oh Hmmm....(Fade out)....
Well im nearly done with the song, not sure why im finishing it, but i am. I play it when i cant concenctrate, to pass time, and i still am not annoyed by what i have. thats good. lately ive been saying alot of incomplete thoughts, i have no idea why. so i think if i add to it right now, then it will sound incomplete, for lack of a better word.
The other song is also almost done, i just need to go over it and kind of just polish it, make it a little better, maybe work on a couple of verses but its playable so thats good, i think i will finally get to complete an entire song.
3 comments:
Hi James, Your talent for writing lyrics and composing music is wonderful. I appreciate your taste for music. The way you took keen interest in promoting your skill is simply superb. Keep going. Wish You all the best
Dear James, You are not a poor poet. I have read your lyrics and I can see in them a great poet in the making. Keep writing and one day You will be the rich poet and powerful lyricist. Put your efforts. Spend time. Nothing is easy.
Hey James,it was nice to go through the lyrics of your song that you sang for us.Remember.!!"Poor poet" is a misnomer but enticing enough to lead anyone to find out what this poor poet has to say.
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